Comments on: #31DBBB – Day 1 http://smartypantsmama.com/2010/07/31dbbb-day-1/ Becoming a Smart Mama ... one piece at a time! Wed, 08 Feb 2012 00:43:38 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Meryl Jaffe http://smartypantsmama.com/2010/07/31dbbb-day-1/comment-page-1/#comment-4284 Meryl Jaffe Wed, 28 Jul 2010 18:42:28 +0000 http://smartypantsmama.com/?p=1935#comment-4284 I love the first pitch! You seem to be doing a great job. I am new to blogging (but not to parenting) and could use advise on my blogsite (just started it). If you have a minute, I'd appreciate it! Good luck with the pitch, Meryl http://departingthetext.blogspot.com I love the first pitch! You seem to be doing a great job. I am new to blogging (but not to parenting) and could use advise on my blogsite (just started it). If you have a minute, I’d appreciate it!
Good luck with the pitch,
Meryl
http://departingthetext.blogspot.com
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]]> By: Babes about Town http://smartypantsmama.com/2010/07/31dbbb-day-1/comment-page-1/#comment-4267 Babes about Town Sun, 25 Jul 2010 10:04:49 +0000 http://smartypantsmama.com/?p=1935#comment-4267 These are great and I also prefer Pitch A, it's very appealing and has a nice 'join the club' feel. I want to have that 'be part of the club' feel on my blog too. I think my pitch is quite clear in my About Me page, but will rethink if I can tweak it to make it even more focused and zingy. These are great and I also prefer Pitch A, it’s very appealing and has a nice ‘join the club’ feel. I want to have that ‘be part of the club’ feel on my blog too. I think my pitch is quite clear in my About Me page, but will rethink if I can tweak it to make it even more focused and zingy.
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]]> By: call2write http://smartypantsmama.com/2010/07/31dbbb-day-1/comment-page-1/#comment-4265 call2write Sun, 25 Jul 2010 06:00:43 +0000 http://smartypantsmama.com/?p=1935#comment-4265 I like Pitch B best, but would change the wording a bit to make the visitor, 1) curious enough to read your blog, and 2) make her want to be included as a Smart Mama: Pitch B: Are you a Smart Mama? See what this Smart Mama eats, supports and uses. Be a Smart Mama with me at SmartyPantsMama.com! For the longer one, I think the second and third lines could be combined to make it shorter and more to the point: A Smart Mama knows the best tools and techniques for parenting, entertainment and life. Share your Smart Mama ideas, and let this Smart Mama’s vast experience in life and motherhood provide an accurate sponsorship of your product, cause or event. Now I need to work on my own pitch! Stopping by from SITS, and looking forward to checking out more of your Smart Mama blog. I like Pitch B best, but would change the wording a bit to make the visitor,
1) curious enough to read your blog, and
2) make her want to be included as a Smart Mama:

Pitch B: Are you a Smart Mama? See what this Smart Mama eats, supports and uses. Be a Smart Mama with me at SmartyPantsMama.com!

For the longer one, I think the second and third lines could be combined to make it shorter and more to the point:

A Smart Mama knows the best tools and techniques for parenting, entertainment and life. Share your Smart Mama ideas, and let this Smart Mama’s vast experience in life and motherhood provide an accurate sponsorship of your product, cause or event.

Now I need to work on my own pitch!

Stopping by from SITS, and looking forward to checking out more of your Smart Mama blog.
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]]> By: Liz @ Sunny Bug http://smartypantsmama.com/2010/07/31dbbb-day-1/comment-page-1/#comment-4263 Liz @ Sunny Bug Sat, 24 Jul 2010 20:34:31 +0000 http://smartypantsmama.com/?p=1935#comment-4263 Hi - visiting from SITS &b their review from week #1...I must have missed you somehow this week. I LOVE your elevator pitch - very nicely written. I'm follwing now...hope you can stop by and visit Sunny Bug :) Hi – visiting from SITS &b their review from week #1…I must have missed you somehow this week. I LOVE your elevator pitch – very nicely written. I’m follwing now…hope you can stop by and visit Sunny Bug :)
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]]> By: Cameron http://smartypantsmama.com/2010/07/31dbbb-day-1/comment-page-1/#comment-4261 Cameron Sat, 24 Jul 2010 19:14:33 +0000 http://smartypantsmama.com/?p=1935#comment-4261 I think these are great pitches! They call people to your blog & give them a way they can participate! I think they're great!! I'm still kinda tweaking mine. I can't find the perfect flow. I think these are great pitches! They call people to your blog & give them a way they can participate! I think they're great!! I'm still kinda tweaking mine. I can't find the perfect flow.

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